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Old 10-12-2013, 06:55 PM   #5
Zen
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Dope fellas.

JW- This is dope as fuck. Your strongest point as a writer is your ability to capture emotion, and so far I've never found a piece of yours that was not packed with emotion. Great job. I agree with Adonis that I did want you to go more in depth in some parts, but you told the story and you told it well so really that is my only complaint. Nice job man.

MW- Nice showing. First off let me start with the negative of this verse. I felt that in most of this battle the rhyming was kinda simplistic. It just seems like you were under a bit of a time constraint and couldn't delve into any further like you'd want to which I understand. The strong point of this is as it always is when it comes to you, and that is the flow. The flow was excellent. Very nice.

I gotta edge this one to Just Write. Nice battle guys.
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