Week 3 - Scripter (1-1) vs. Clutter Buck (0-0) - CLUTTER BUCK WINS 7-0

[Mike Wrecka]

impressive battle.


clutterbuck - my favorite verse of the week that ive read so far. it looked at the picture and said let me create a story around it. which I appreciated. this was one of the tougher pictures to work with and you did an amazing job. see when I read verses in this league I want to be entertained. yes I like mechanics and structure to be advanced, but truth is I want to read a verse that takes me on a journey with a plot and characters and what not. clutter the rhyming here is my style, it reads well when being spoken in a spoken word cadence. that's what I prefer im not gonna sit here and rap these topicals. so ya kudos to you I really liked this piece.

scripter- this was a lot better than other voters are giving you credit for. it had an unusual flow but I caught it and rode it the whole way through no problem. the word choice here was nice. you portrayed a vivid version of the picture and added in some French that I thought gave the verse some flavor. I really enjoyed this piece too tbh. it was beautiful.

overall - both good verses, but clutterbuck was superior. scripter good showing you just ran into a verse that really resonated with me this week. but your verse was good enough to beat some other just not CBs. thanks for the reads guys.

vote = Clutterbuck