Escape The Pain

CopyPat · 10-12-2013, 06:28 PM

i liked the idea of this.. yeah its been down before lots obviously but its true so hard to knock someone for speaking truth. had some good rhyming, good flow. good vocab, good everything really man. it was good but it wasn't great, there wasn't enough for me lyrically to me like amazed with it.. im talking more of the actual skill of rapping, like using multi syllables and scheming etc. u have a good grasp on it obviously..and this looks like it would make a good idea which i give u props for but would be dope to see u do more lyrically next time with something like this. stay up

10-12-2013, 06:28 PM	#11
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	i liked the idea of this.. yeah its been down before lots obviously but its true so hard to knock someone for speaking truth. had some good rhyming, good flow. good vocab, good everything really man. it was good but it wasn't great, there wasn't enough for me lyrically to me like amazed with it.. im talking more of the actual skill of rapping, like using multi syllables and scheming etc. u have a good grasp on it obviously..and this looks like it would make a good idea which i give u props for but would be dope to see u do more lyrically next time with something like this. stay up __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

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