PURE ENERGY (0-0) vs. Inertia (0-0) PURE WINS

Immaculate · 02-15-2013, 06:19 AM

Nice drop from both..

Inertia, good lines, felt as though u were just throwin words round w/o any real solid structure, setups could have been placed in however your concepts were good, not great. Good flow though.

Pure, seemed poetic more then a typical battle verse (maybe you were aiming for that type of style? ) anyways, u cleanly executed ur setups, but closers werent that great imo. Good punches, enough to take this.

V/ Pure.

Good job guys.

Maximus · 02-26-2013, 01:24 PM

Not a bad match, inertia had the thermodynamix line which was aight but still needed some more tweaking. Pure had the restful state and the noble gases line which were also cool but ur lines are too long winded and tend to take away from the punch, so work on that. Props to both, i got pure taking this with more quotables.
V/pure

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02-15-2013, 06:19 AM	#1
Immaculate Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,103 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 412367	Nice drop from both.. Inertia, good lines, felt as though u were just throwin words round w/o any real solid structure, setups could have been placed in however your concepts were good, not great. Good flow though. Pure, seemed poetic more then a typical battle verse (maybe you were aiming for that type of style? ) anyways, u cleanly executed ur setups, but closers werent that great imo. Good punches, enough to take this. V/ Pure. Good job guys.

02-26-2013, 01:24 PM	#2
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Not a bad match, inertia had the thermodynamix line which was aight but still needed some more tweaking. Pure had the restful state and the noble gases line which were also cool but ur lines are too long winded and tend to take away from the punch, so work on that. Props to both, i got pure taking this with more quotables. V/pure