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10-10-2013, 12:02 AM
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This was way above norm stuff for a freeverse. Very deliberate, and so much so that I
think if you actually spent time you would blow allota ppl's shit way out the water. This was excellent for what you stated it was. The only real flaw to it imo, was how the rhyme scheme transitions in the first have didn't happen smoothly enough for a seemless read throughout. Other than that, pretty solid and intelligent work. Props...
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