WK1: Genocide (0-0) VS. Orc (0-0) [GENOCIDE WINS, 10-2.]

Inno · 02-14-2013, 09:47 PM

geno

im diggin your style man you have dope as stop and go type of flow with the way you set your scheme...def some that waould be dope over the right beat. great imagery due to your descriptive tones..felt like that was your strong point for me. yo uhad some dope lines scattered through out this piece..the macgiver line and the self centered are great example of your writing ability. i mean thats what i like about this piece...the slick woirding done so smoothly, with dope progression and vocab...mechanically sound piece. felt like your story could of used a bit more meat in my eyes...other than that no complaints..

or

you had a different approach to your piece..which i thought wa pretty cool man. your multis are onpoint through out the entire piece.they where flawless and flowed smoothly
from one line to the next.imagery is there and you paint a good picture or scenerio from your word about the pic...though i gotta be honest i started feeling this towards the end..felt like the beginning was going no where..then the middle towards the end it got dope as fuck man., i the ideas become passion line..the gravity line..really cool writing there brah...as far as the story goes..like i said felt like it really picked up towards the middle end..dope shit..

overall

i got geno takin this i thought his verse was just a bit more consistant for me...his verse was much cleaner and seemed to read much easier because of it. orc had a solid fuckiung drop but i felt like his begining wasa a bit slow for me..great battle to be honest. in the end i got with geno.

vote- genocide

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02-14-2013, 09:47 PM	#6
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	geno im diggin your style man you have dope as stop and go type of flow with the way you set your scheme...def some that waould be dope over the right beat. great imagery due to your descriptive tones..felt like that was your strong point for me. yo uhad some dope lines scattered through out this piece..the macgiver line and the self centered are great example of your writing ability. i mean thats what i like about this piece...the slick woirding done so smoothly, with dope progression and vocab...mechanically sound piece. felt like your story could of used a bit more meat in my eyes...other than that no complaints.. or you had a different approach to your piece..which i thought wa pretty cool man. your multis are onpoint through out the entire piece.they where flawless and flowed smoothly from one line to the next.imagery is there and you paint a good picture or scenerio from your word about the pic...though i gotta be honest i started feeling this towards the end..felt like the beginning was going no where..then the middle towards the end it got dope as fuck man., i the ideas become passion line..the gravity line..really cool writing there brah...as far as the story goes..like i said felt like it really picked up towards the middle end..dope shit.. overall i got geno takin this i thought his verse was just a bit more consistant for me...his verse was much cleaner and seemed to read much easier because of it. orc had a solid fuckiung drop but i felt like his begining wasa a bit slow for me..great battle to be honest. in the end i got with geno. vote- genocide