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Inno · 10-09-2013, 09:13 PM

godam the vocab use...the flow...each reset stands alone if they could but they come together to piece something dope...loved your imagery my friend...loved the depth of each line...each word seemed to connect to something else...something more and I thought that was fucking ill man...at times it felt like you lost your way..but not in a bad way I think...more of a focused madness...you forgot the world lol...either way this was enjoyed thoroughly. I actually thought that lion line was dope...sometimes corny shit can be dope as well...

good job eph.

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10-09-2013, 09:13 PM	#1
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	godam the vocab use...the flow...each reset stands alone if they could but they come together to piece something dope...loved your imagery my friend...loved the depth of each line...each word seemed to connect to something else...something more and I thought that was fucking ill man...at times it felt like you lost your way..but not in a bad way I think...more of a focused madness...you forgot the world lol...either way this was enjoyed thoroughly. I actually thought that lion line was dope...sometimes corny shit can be dope as well... good job eph.