Week 1 - vividlyvague vs. Innovator - VIVIDLYVAGUE WINS 4-0

[Mr. J]

This battle was quite interesting...especially since I can't see the picture
Regardless I will go off instinct of flow mechanics and such...not flow persay...
but the progress of each piece..
Vivid kept the rhyme scheme very interesting from my POV
which in turn kept the piece weaved together nicely
the imagery added a pep in ypur step unseen from your OMs
making it enjoyable because you presented a strong piece
which I did enjoy
Innovator...you brpught a very poetic vibe to your writing
Which was nice it seemed simple but complex in what you brought
it had a different style of linguistics...maybe that's not the right word
but you kept the focus on your topic and it shone thrpugh
not to the same degree as your opponent...the styles clash here
which is great when it comes to battles in leagues such as this
to be honest...I feel both brought a different type of vibe to the league
as far as my vote goes Ima have to give it to someone....
and that makes it tough because both of ypu are unique in style
I feel that even though Innovator brpught a nice piece it wasn't fulfilled
it didn't have that cherry on top but I know you will progress
so.......my vpte goes to Vivid