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09-27-2013, 10:01 PM
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The Clown Prince
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The rhyme scheme on here is pretty slick
I'm enjoying the vibe I'm getting from this too the multis were placed together pretty well the vocab was on point for the piece as well seemed like a different approach for you either way keep writing breh
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