WK1: Coup (0-0) VS. ZenLand (0-0) [ZENLAND WINS, 7-0.]

Camp Bell · 02-12-2013, 03:58 PM

both drops were very entertaining. but as far as the pic goes and the direction each writer took. id have to go with Zen on this as having the more enjoyable verse that described the pic as he saw it with better imagery and story line. i felt coup verse was ok but it just gave me the feel that even he didnt really know where he wanted to take this. Its almost as if this was meant for a different topic. great job to both yall tho.

vote: Zen.

02-12-2013, 03:58 PM	#1
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	both drops were very entertaining. but as far as the pic goes and the direction each writer took. id have to go with Zen on this as having the more enjoyable verse that described the pic as he saw it with better imagery and story line. i felt coup verse was ok but it just gave me the feel that even he didnt really know where he wanted to take this. Its almost as if this was meant for a different topic. great job to both yall tho. vote: Zen. __________________ get high. write rhymes.

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