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09-23-2013, 01:19 AM
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Mic Check
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
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ahah i agree with zen. ur other one i read was dope.. this was just lazy and fucked..also the rhymes were real simple too.. nothing here really... this should have been a post in cypher rather than a new thread in open mic. put a little more time and effort into it man
ill read ur next one
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