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Zen · 09-21-2013, 10:33 PM

I'm stoned and will give you no mercy.

I have two words you need to become a better writer.

Word number one: Punctuation. I don't know what the fuck is happening when there is one huge fucking run on sentence. Use commas to signify pauses.
Word number two: Dictionary. When someone spells I'd as ide, or tales as tails, I can not and will not take them seriously.

All in all this was a jumbled mess which could be really cool, maybe.

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09-21-2013, 10:33 PM	#2
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I'm stoned and will give you no mercy. I have two words you need to become a better writer. Word number one: Punctuation. I don't know what the fuck is happening when there is one huge fucking run on sentence. Use commas to signify pauses. Word number two: Dictionary. When someone spells I'd as ide, or tales as tails, I can not and will not take them seriously. All in all this was a jumbled mess which could be really cool, maybe.