I <3 schemes

[dull boy]

Originally Posted by oXus

i wrote a piece with the underlying theme of Love, once. or the common conception of, y'know. one verse just dealt with sex. kind of primal, visceral even. that part was good. the rest was mostly existential angst/misery loves company.

this seemed a bit unserious or disingenious, but what do i know really. the writing was good.

You aren't allowed to write about love. Too many people have done it. What's cool sounding about your piece is that you spoke on angst and misery, too. This way the words ''cause' and 'ain't' can still be used.

Link me to your piece and I'll check it out.