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Old 08-31-2013, 03:40 AM   #1
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Old 08-31-2013, 07:42 AM   #2
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Notebook entry. Journalist verse. "The serpent-bite has hurt my synapses"
Purple dipped tourniquets. Temperature - just perfect, with thermodynamics
The elements. A veteran touch. Over pernicious incensements'

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Old 08-31-2013, 12:51 PM   #4
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Hollow the oceans. Swallow the chakra from lava and molten
Evolve into Vulcan. The Dalai Lama of cokeheads.
Prophet has spoken. Unparalleled. Embody the flesh of the Pharaohs throne
Jurassic prone. Ensnaring. Arrows fletched in from melted bone


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Old 09-01-2013, 06:53 AM   #5
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This was loaded with one liners, for the most part. I thought the "yield sign" invocation was brilliant. Because of the fragmentation, a lot of my favorite lines were followed by ones that I didn't enjoy as much, either because the rhyme seemed forced or stretched or because the concept just wasn't as interesting. It's tough to build real consistency in a verse like this, though.

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Life force is wretched. Sifting through my minds mortal essence
Fuse-burning my arms, using cyborg genetics
Consquence'll catapult. Populace. Build Castle with bricks
Godly flesh, laced with grapplin hooks' like Michaelangelo is
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Hollow the oceans. Swallow the chakra from lava and molten
Evolve into Vulcan. The Dalai Lama of cokeheads.
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Old 09-02-2013, 12:42 PM   #6
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Old 09-02-2013, 02:23 PM   #7
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There's a gay guy in my town who has bleached blonde hair. His name is Greg. He's of African descent.

If you catch my drift.
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Ya. This was pretty nasty. Dope vocab flex. Some serious lines scattered through this one, mad qoutables. Great piece.
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