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Old 08-29-2013, 09:59 PM   #7
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Writing Sample - Aesthetic

m the rat in the alley, starving for a fight.
Im the food behind a cat, attacking a mouse.
Without me; a frame without a house.



Animal Instinct


im like a shark in the ocean whose teeth are broken,
cant get a grip, so im slowly decomposin,
or a penguin on the ice with feet completely frozen,
I keep movin forward for the weak and least imposin,
at my core a sand crab on the shore, suffering from beach erosion,
trying to keep my head above water after each explosion,
sorta like an orca underwater, I got deep emotions,
opposed to revealing my true feelings but I keep exposin,
and as I feel defeat approachin, things are bleak so I seek a fulcrum,
so i could pivot and exhibit inner peace in motion,
but im like a turtle facing hurdles, with each prupulsion,
the only thing im slowly headed for is complete destruction,
my marriage is just like a parrot, we have brief discussions,
so I try to Ram head first through my problems, but i keep concussin,
I wish I was a frog in a bog, so i could leap or something,
and get a new pad instead of dealing with this frequent shunning,
ive been called an animal, really i wish i was,
cause they do what they do really just because,
hunters had it right, what did we become farmers for?
id rather be a dirty blood thirsty carnivore,
running on instinct, then this runs through my mind as I contemplate,
it would be much more relaxing to be a plant and just cross polinate
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