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08-22-2013, 12:47 AM	#7
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I liked this a lot. The off-kilter flow with the wonderful mix of images was pretty great. Every thought transitioned smoothly. Every line was fun, and a few were funny. I guess it just seems like you wrote this with joy. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

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