Cypher Flow Gone Wrong - The Microphone Don Juan

[CopyPat]

the all biblical rap that ya'll listen to
its all literal crap, i'm not shitting you
applause typical, clap its called ritual
non traditional tracks I’m all original

the smooth rhyme sayer sparkling rhythms
ya two time haters gargling jizm
i spew lines greater harder efficient...when
you dudes' vibrators charge in the kitchen den

the smack talk extraordinaire droppin for laughs
i rap lots, its sorta rare that copy relax
my back pocket stores a pair of condoms in packs
your laptop porn is where ya cock is ejacted

the happy go luckiest rapper to fuck with this
the nastiest ugliest flow nappy its rugged bitch
I’m actually such a sick bastard disgusting shit
naturally thunderous the sound of these summer hits

i slay rappers commonly, they easily just dead
my brain matter always be the secret to success
so take back ya qualities and leave us to this thread
and say that apology so we can just digress

i drive around the city with a poisonous heart
and try to pound some titties with my boys in the car
i write it how i live it, nah im toyin, its farce... jokes
your style soundin shitty like the noise of a fart, gross

theres nothing i can't rhyme dude, its painfully obv
just puffing so i'm high, whew, crazy i'm gone
judging by this thai beaut baby she's soft
i'm something like the swine flu, majorly hog


lol... was whippin this up in the cypher section but she just kept commin

[Lost in Thought]

to start i'd like to say i like the lengths of you lines.
to me they are very doable on audio, and on here i see alot of peeps whose lines should be broke down to two instead of continuing the length. i myself prefer to keep it short but say wat i need to say... helps the flow a great deal.


And like you said on mine, i liked that you continued your rhyme scheems...
alot of people round here like to do two lines and then stop that rhyme, and it helps to keep the content dope, because you can start the next line based on the next concept, but i think both dragging a concept or even starting a new one with the same rhymes shows a more thought out thought process and i prefer it when im reading stuff.



as for this spit itself, like that you where doing whole line multi's gave it an edge. i do it sometimes, its flex'n your rhyming capablity to do it well, flow, and still keep to a concept. so upps on that.



"i slay rappers commonly, they easily just dead
my brain matter always be the secret to success
so take back ya qualities and leave us to this thread
and say that apology so we can 'just' digress"


would drop that "just" personally, already has enough constitant repitition and multi's to rhyme well, and flows better IMO witout it.



flame opener btw, last stanza kinda slipped. maby lack of understanding but didnt like the last line. good drop overall man

[Certain]

Man, CopyPat spits with the most ridiculous flow, see fans copy that shit like they're hitting Ctrl+C. Mostly he's talking smack, hits with the boasts, digital blows, and I'd obvi ask if he could post spiritual notes. But that's not his swagger, so I'll take what he's offering: full-bar schemes raping coffins and strafing all emcees. The illest shit is dude appreciates others. He kills it with a loop of reaching to brothers, keeps instilling wit and truth while seeking discovery.

Originally Posted by CopyPat

the smack talk extraordinaire droppin for laughs
i rap lots, its sorta rare that copy relax
my back pocket stores a pair of condoms in packs
your laptop porn is where ya cock is ejacted

[veritas]

flow is tight man. I would like to see you try to push the boundaries of how much content you could mold into your flow. Challenge: can you increase the syllables?

[ill nik-A]

Flow was tight throughout but the first two stanzas were my favorites content wise, just felt the rest wasn't as good but good

[dead man]

lighthearted and dope. just what i expect from a copy cypher type of flow, which is what i anticipated especially given the title. im surprised you dont just forgo the written side of things and start dropping lil tracks. its obviously not about the writing for you, its about the flow and how it WOULD sound on a beat, so why not just do that?

the smack talk extraordinaire droppin for laughs
i rap lots, its sorta rare that copy relax

swaggar

definitely some lazier rhyming in here but true to the cypher mentality, all fitting.

thanks man.



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[CopyPat]

no doubt, i have done a few lil tracks black. It's something i try to usually do with all my open mic pieces, u guys are right, I write them all to fit over beats for sure. More to come hopefully soon. It's just harder to actually record shit than just write it haha
@dead man
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8389
https://soundcloud.com/copypat

^^some audios

[Wise Wiggles]

sick lil flex homie.. imma get to that shit you sent me right now, my bad lol

[oats]

Dig it man, flow was tight, rhymes were on point. Good shit as usual.

[Mr. J]

Nice cypher drop, kept the whole flow up to pace
the vibe was real resilient, took the bull by the horns so to speak
nice collection all together it seemed to match up nicely
sick work my friend

[Dove Dozer]

Most consistant emcee up on ncs. Ima get at you with audio bro. Im just in the middle of moving. Havent forgot you.

Mad nice as always.

Holler

[Neighbor]

MY DUDE

I know my feedback on one of your pieces is looong overdue

That said, this was a really solid flex & just shows how much of an animal you are when you're not even trying

I dunno if this makes sense as far as critique goes, but the way you structure ya schemes coupled w/ the vocabulary you use really showcases your mastery of this shit

Few can do it better

[God Of War]

for some reason i read this shit in eazy e's voice from "boys in the hood" lmao

nice piece tho copy

[Nigma]

turned out dope copy, you can always pen up some silky flow on command, not surprised to see a drop like this from you tbh haha. I gotta hit up that cypher thread more often

[Lost in Thought]

btw the beinging of this verse's vocab reminds me of something I wrote 3 years ago...



If i rap about my opinion, I'm political
If I rap cuz i'm christian, its biblical
Rappin bout weed makes me a criminal
Like the message I preach is cynical
The protection that I need is minimal
Cuz the sickness in me is clinical

[Eŋg]

idk about this. i recall encountering you on RF and thinking you were nice. i liked you more then, maybe i've changed, maybe you've castrated your delivery to the point all that matters is the rhyme to you. and yea nigga... you can rhyme. no doubt. but i don't got to fuck with lines about sparkling rhythm/gargling jizm just becase, more or less, the syllable counts are reprised and the rhymes are repeatedly echoed. don't get me wrong, shit is not exactly easy to do... i've tried it, for like two lines or one stanza, and then think this shit is gai what am i doin'. not saying you're gai. you might be... i wouldn't judge. i'm sat here thinking of a good analogy to convey the fact i'm not hating. i got nothing. i thought you were nice on RF, it was like two years ago so i can't remember what i read but i was going to holla @ you for a collab then i didn't log in for like a year. yea. might sound better out aloud. i can't read this and like it.

[BWHAHA]

hey pat! not bad buddy!! I lyke ;ole