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Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 10,025
Battle Record: 26-54
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Ok so im a little saucy so please ecuse the realness.
Red glare. Good stuff. Technical savy man you are yes sir no doubt about. Great word placement as my eyes follwedfairly easy. Thw scwne you painted was, cool great wemotion greet imagry yo.t Got to then end...got bored. All of that so he cpuld get caught any way? Good shit im not gpnna lie I was reading intensively. ..but I got to end and I was like bleh. Nigga Yo this some dope shit mang thought came with a cool take on the subject. Not to say your opponent didnt just thought yours was a bit freshes after reading both. Couple of bumps here and there nothing To big or enough to interfere with the story lines progress. Got to the end amd I felt like you wrote a complete piece..I felt like having a cigarette if you know what I mean lol...good shit Overall. I got nigma taking this I felt he matched his opponent in the technical aspect Brought a dope angle to the topic and in my eyes wrote a appealing story. Felt like Red sorta wrote about nothing. ..atleast nothing that interested me...goos battle Nig |
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