Week 4 - Red Glare vs Nigma - N WINS

Adonis · 08-17-2013, 11:41 AM

Nig - Keystle son. A adopted adult who watches figures die around him, accepting and forgiving and loving those before they pass. Flow was on and off, mostly on but a 2 bars didn't have the best end rhymes in the world. Very short verse, hard to comment on further. I assume you wanted to show so you didn't get zero points, but as its keyed not the most thought provoking verse, esspecially if I consider the standards I hold you to.

Red - solid story, nothing special but win worthy. Solid charcter build up, a bit of a lost art. Good flow, nothing really stands out in this verse bro. Its not bad, but its not ground breaking. Just enough for the win

V/Glare

08-17-2013, 11:41 AM	#1
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Nig - Keystle son. A adopted adult who watches figures die around him, accepting and forgiving and loving those before they pass. Flow was on and off, mostly on but a 2 bars didn't have the best end rhymes in the world. Very short verse, hard to comment on further. I assume you wanted to show so you didn't get zero points, but as its keyed not the most thought provoking verse, esspecially if I consider the standards I hold you to. Red - solid story, nothing special but win worthy. Solid charcter build up, a bit of a lost art. Good flow, nothing really stands out in this verse bro. Its not bad, but its not ground breaking. Just enough for the win V/Glare __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

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