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Old 08-15-2013, 11:20 AM   #10
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Difficult to call. Feel story has come once again with effort and strong rhymes however his content was a little lacking and a tad boring which it shouldn't be considering his direction of taking the topic. Also a tad choppy in places but it felt intentional and worked well tbf. Though that could be how I'm reading it.

Baron took this a very unexpected way. It didn't give any room
To show off his rhyming abilities, flowed well none the less but some super simple end rhymes which I wasn't expecting. The content was average but unique. He did however make this all better with that last segment which really polished the whole verse by creating an actual enjoyable creative story arch, unique twist on a children's story, that last verse allowed him to stretch his lyrical prowess - difficult shout this battle....

I'm going to give em another read through an finalise
My decision


Ok I am going to have to vote

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