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Old 08-15-2013, 06:12 AM   #3
Certain
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Delicious girl is back,
Came to slaughter this track.
Can't compete against me.... I'm hot I spit hotter than fireballs.
The way you dropped the rhyme for a second was, in fact, hotter than fireballs. Fireballs are very hot, so that's a strong metaphor.

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I'm confidence so when you say I'm the greatest its a compliment.
I like that you said you are confidence, not confident. You are the quality of self pride itself. Everyone needs you. That's a strong image.

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I'm a Queen....respect that & don't start no beef.
These cats wanna be like me,
can't be like me cause I'm a 'g'.
Your assonance was rattling in this section. You're a Queen and a 'g.' That's a potent combination.

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mess with me, I'll destroy you soft people.
And then you spit fire with the final line, threatening with serious menace. This line had the feeling of a titan staring down from the heavens.
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