Does This Verse Make Sense?

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by trap

This text shit has been around since 95. I started in, from what the historian says in late 96. I use 97. Either way, I stopped in 03 when real life shit happened, my son, etc. I might not write punchlines according to the netcee standard, but I know one when I see it. If we are basing it off of your hiphop knowledge and listening to LL battle in the 80's, have you even heard him vs Kool Moe Dee? Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

Yeahof course I heard it, but it still derives from emcees standing there dissing each other without it even rhyming, corner battling where they just dissed each other and who ever had the best insult won....that shit was like snapping then it formed into rhyme battling and etc but it still derived from that nd ll cool j n moe dee had legit punches in it ie

You can't win, I don't bend, Look what you got yourself in,
just using your name I took those L’s,
hung ‘em on your head and rocked your bells


also


Battlin's for real men, and I doubt if
You can even hang or give a run for the money
You're just a sucker, and it's funny


this


You ain't got a chance in the world
Your records were smokin', but you sound like a girl




as i said know where the shit came from and what created it, from back in the begining the ll-cool-j battle as an example shows u