Does This Verse Make Sense?

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

is GOW suggesting 'ask Beavis, i get nothing Butthead ' isn't a punchline

because it's a statement and not dissing someone?

you newer textcees sicken me

not new and that shit isnt a punchline

punch means to hit, ie the butt of a joke is the part of a joke that hits, aka the punchline u being in a live battle league is a bit sad without you knowing that

and text is different then live shit aswell

[Brian Bryan]

Originally Posted by God Of War

not new and that shit isnt a punchline

punch means to hit, ie the butt of a joke is the part of a joke that hits, aka the punchline u being in a live battle league is a bit sad without you knowing that

and text is different then live shit aswell

@ill nik-A @trap

please school this textcee for me

i'm at work right now

kthnxbye

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

@ill nik-A @trap

please school this textcee for me

i'm at work right now

kthnxbye

lmao cuz ur in a writing group u know more? gtfo here with that

i been listening to rap longer, probably writing longer since i been doing it since 99

u cant tell me a fucking meta4 and a punchline is exactly the same thing

[veritas]

Let me show you a glimpse into the Mind Assassin's art:



Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio.

first of all we have an internal rhyme and the end rhyme and it flows smooth. second Rape and tonio, third the nine will fuck your face up and tonio presents a hefty entendre.


You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia.
My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior

That "set up" line is fucking dope and I know alot of cats are like why didnt i think of that. this is imagery. imagine me slicing an X onto your face, that is quality...excelsior means quality....X-celcsior..easy.


Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up,
My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up

There is the X again just linking the concept in a third way which is xxx which is me fucking this dude up. this is the bar people have a prob with...but sticks him up has a double meaning also....sticks him like stab him and he shrivels like a raisin. Sticks him up like robs him (of his life and a win) so he shrivels (cowers) like a raisin...you know when you sit in a bathtub for too long? as he throws his hands up in defeat.

Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram,
V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man

I see through a bitch like a sonogram is fucking awesome and ether. you are lying if you say otherwise. I am a pro assassin. Assassins are unseen. here is the word play: C-murder is master P's brother...that has been done. But I said SEE murder (remember you won't see me) like Master P's brother was Hollow man. This means at least three seperate things. Cmon man.

Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs
Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes

Google liquid fists....you ever see IP Man? the way he justs beats dudes with his fists? (no tonio). so me pummeling the chest collapses his lungs....so Pecs (chest) lost. GET IT YOU IDIOT!? then the cu de grax: his avy is dope...and the dope always gets flushed (lost) when the heat (cops, my verse) comes.


all in all....show me another Writer who can be this complex and yet so smooth in their battles. I am the most well rounded ahead of my time persona here. Everyone knows it and treats me as such. GOW you are just arguing to be different. I think also you are mad at me, because I exposed to you how you have been failing lately. Trust that I did that out of love though, and not hate. I just want to see that you become a better person and more like me.