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Old 07-31-2013, 01:48 PM   #3
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ayyyo fuck outta here with that 'letter S.H. are the theme'...dead that...shit is beyond retarded i aint even got words for that shit to do it justice

& that said, i fucked with this verse, it had its moments...
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hallucinations become a safe haven, and empower the feeble,
till everything is backwards and they crash down from the highest steeple
^ like the message, first line was written nice, second line - i feel the message could've been delivered nicer but wdeva...

fuck it i wont quote anymore, but i will say i didnt mind reading this at all, but it was def lacking a lil something...like originality

never a hate thing, but take it how you want

#1 be easy.
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