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el es a la mode
Join Date: Jul 2013
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There's a lot of visual graphics in there, but it doesn't seem to all tie together as well as I'd like. I know there's a bunch of metaphors for what this means and I can catch some of them, but some of them aren't so easily defined to me.
I liked this line Drawing burgundy blood on my canvass, paint blushes the murder rate but I don't get this one So disgustingly shy, it shutters the sky red how does shyness color the sky the color of blood and war? well, some of it was interesting.
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