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MetaSin vs. Namix {Tie}
David Lama
September 30th, 2009, 02:17 PM DOHpe vs. Clash Verses due saturday october 10th 2009 11:59PM pacific Line Limit: Min = 16, Max = 30 (Line Limit can be more if agreed upon by both) Match whoever drops first 1st person cant edit after 2nd person drops. 2nd person cant edit after the first vote. Breaking this rule = DQ Recycling = Automatic DQ Feeding = Automatic DQ No Posting opponents picture without opponents permission 1st to 8 Votes wins No Ko’s (In case of a close battle. Must be ahead by 2 votes in order to win Meaning if someone is up 8-7 he still hasn’t won until he’s up by 2. If the next vote is for him then he wins. If its not then its 8-8 and in order for someone to win he’d either have to get the next 2 votes or wait until he’s up by 2 votes. ) check in. G/l [HR][/HR]MetaSin October 1st, 2009, 01:09 PM sure. [HR][/HR]namix October 10th, 2009, 11:41 AM yo - like i said before, i went 20 im cool with the 24 hr extension sin, i pmed my verse to allah so drop whenever you're ready. [HR][/HR]MetaSin October 11th, 2009, 10:21 PM aye... some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth wantin cats to call U-Sur.. n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here... he'll still die in amazing fashion... but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3 done. [HR][/HR]David Lama October 11th, 2009, 10:24 PM Namix's verse timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost.. i cant fuck this up! or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss! his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran status in clash is like state law, and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”.. …and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass! see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic i might be white, but im still particular with my flow if u only feel African cuts.. ..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story! so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son! [HR][/HR]Prism October 12th, 2009, 07:04 PM last vote for today.this takin alot out of a nigga.hope this makes up for my no show tho. some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon hah if tv mean time virus this was sick.nam line was good. you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth wantin cats to call U-Sur.. n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you hah user. this was a liiiilte forced in there nahmean. but still good. you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here... he'll still die in amazing fashion... but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career cnn works cause it just sound like seein n nahmean.dun know if im into calling peeps by there first letter but still.mix line was ok. all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew pullin teeth was slick.swine flew was a little cornball. die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time ohhhh happening line was illy.twitter was nice too.i been waitin for someone to put up a sick twitter line nahmean and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3 aight.too wordy. a good verse.not your best but real nice. nicer than the average cat nahmean? your usual wordplay and haymakers. diggin it. id give it a 8.3 timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost.. i cant fuck this up! or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss! his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran status in clash is like state law, and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin the loss is still a loss so it doesnt hit too hard.dohpe is med was cool.im a bit sick of medacine punchlines tho,yall need to quit so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”.. …and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass! sin sears was nice.manatee was funny and i liked it. see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic benchmark was mad fuckin slick. i wsa diggin that shit.possible the line of the battle.jamie foxx line was not too smooth.too easy to see meng. i might be white, but im still particular with my flow if u only feel African cuts.. ..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic angola knife was sick.ur endin off good here makin a case for yourself.hah@balls nor dick.that was fuckin nice as getout. whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story! so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son! ball room was wack meng.shit was mad simple.no dice was not a good closer either.this hurt you dog. id give this one a 7.9 VOTE - METASIN [HR][/HR]Hush October 14th, 2009, 12:29 PM Discount that vote [HR][/HR]timevirus October 16th, 2009, 03:27 PM Namix: timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost.. i cant fuck this up! or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss! his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran status in clash is like state law, and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”.. …and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass! see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic i might be white, but im still particular with my flow if u only feel African cuts.. ..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story! so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son! Metasin: aye... some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth wantin cats to call U-Sur.. n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here... he'll still die in amazing fashion... but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3 ************************************************ ^^the best of the bold from namix were the manatee, angola, and hoover lines. best of the bold from metasin were the TV screens, concealed weapon, and pulling teeth lines. very close battle, had to read it twice. on the 2nd pass, namix's humor edged it for me. the line of the battle was a toss up between TV screens & manatee, & the visual of a massive bitch droppin her ass combined with the innovative wordplay was pretty much the clincher. this is the 1st verse i've read of metasin, and it didn't disappoint. i just felt that namix hit a smidge harder, and some of meta's references were a bit leukwarm, imo. vote - namix, props to both of u on a hot battle. edit: i decided to discuss the best lines instead of color-coding shit. [HR][/HR]Truc. October 17th, 2009, 07:31 PM some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3 Vs. timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost.. i cant fuck this up! or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss! u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”.. …and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass! im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic Both had some equally played & forced shit, i.e User line/CNN/Swine flew/Metasin-Dohpe/Benchmark/Ballroom, the rest were either ok or just decent. I'm gonna go for Namix just cuz he had less forced & his missis werent as bad, both had the same amount of nice lines but he just edged it out slightly. v/ Namix Good battle gettin slept on.... [HR][/HR]Kenny the G October 23rd, 2009, 01:10 AM some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here... he'll still die in amazing fashion... but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time vs timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost.. i cant fuck this up! or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss! his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran status in clash is like state law, and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story! v/metasin [HR][/HR]K Y Z O October 25th, 2009, 05:37 AM some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth wantin cats to call U-Sur.. n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here... he'll still die in amazing fashion... but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3 Alright, diggin' the opener, that was a cool flip. 2nd bar was nice, liked the U-Sur & 'Mix line too. Enamel w/p was nice, and closer was hilarious. Overall a solid, dope verse. Vs, timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost.. i cant fuck this up! or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss! u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”.. …and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass! see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high i might be white, but im still particular with my flow if u only feel African cuts.. ..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic Nice opener, Cal line didn't quote because it was really a played flip, but it was alright I recon. You had alot of cool w/p which I quote, Angola and Nordic was my fav. A few I didn't quote came off forced slighty to me. Overall you had a solid verse, but consistency-wise.. V, MetaSin [HR][/HR]Barack Olama December 5th, 2009, 12:01 PM 2-2 tie both get a win |
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