"Bombs over Volgograd"

Split · 07-27-2013, 09:47 AM

Interesting read. Good rhymes as always. A lot of the concepts were above my head today tbh.. I think I will break down one if your future verses. The mood and tone were pretty distant for me here, felt like a general air of warning but it came off stale. This is probably just a verse for another day. i found myself skimming. The writing and concepts are always impressive though keep writing

07-27-2013, 09:47 AM	#7
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Interesting read. Good rhymes as always. A lot of the concepts were above my head today tbh.. I think I will break down one if your future verses. The mood and tone were pretty distant for me here, felt like a general air of warning but it came off stale. This is probably just a verse for another day. i found myself skimming. The writing and concepts are always impressive though keep writing __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com Last edited by Split; 07-28-2013 at 06:51 AM.

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