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07-24-2013, 10:53 PM
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ghost in the matrix
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This was nice man the flow was a ton better in the second stanza imo def just a flex piece with some nice wording and concepts. The execution was good for the most part but that first stanza really brought down the quality of the whole piece, not by much but enough to notice. Overall it was def a good drop an I can tell you didn't put a ton of effort into which says more for you thn for this piece. Keep it up man an thnks for feeding my piece
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