Boredom (1-1) vs. Jo E. Murder (1-1) BOREDOM WINS

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aight homebrew. complete breakdown at your request. And for the record I have no bias for or against longbar, I prefer to write in shorter bars but whatever you feel like is your voice is your voice. More power to you.

Originally Posted by Boredom

easy.

fuck the chit chat, i heard a slut say that i am not raw
rofl...that came straight from a horses mouth..so i broke ur moms jaw
lol'd. Simple but effective
i'm the illest so i'm coppin the dub w/ out a fuckin doubt
faggot if ur up to snuff it's cause i used a snub nose to snuff u out
Didn't really hit for me
ur into some weird shit,strap ons n girls clothes, ya heads fucked
fucking faggot.i can gaurentee ur lines aren't the only thing u dress up
Effective personal, LOTB easily
i'll send this lame to the spirit world w/ out snappin ur neck
fuck a seyance i'll unload a clip in ghost to make him astral project
Okay nameflip

Originally Posted by Jo E. Murder

Expos:
- Hes from big bad Vancouver, where he acclaims where actual murder resides. (Just wanna put that out there with a picture)
idgaf
"Big Bad Vancouver"

Unnecesary
P.S.
Fuck this Canadien, infact fuck Canada. Aight. Fuck them....
Canada's cool tho

Bore couldnt withstand the martyr! If anythings good, its like a Walmart cashier... he's "scannin' bars quick!" [/EZ.]
There's an attempt at wordplay. Not really a punch though.
So how hes even hot as Joe? Im giving "Bo's a shocking flow..." without ensuring the "staff that Gambit charges!"
Rhyme's a little weak, has to be enunciated correctly tow work. But this is more building yourself up than actually being a punch
We wouldn't applaud him for his boring or awful writin'! Fuck a MacMillan: I'll tell you Boredom is "not excitement!"
Incredibly basic nameplay. Didn't really hit very well considering that's literally what the noun boredom is, could've been related to the guy for some effect, but that angle's going to seem played as fuck 99% of the time
The rook's so rubbish! "Jay-Z's promotion failure" - the way "he couldnt push Jo buttons" - so how he raw at liners?
Okay concept, but its a flip based off your own name that doesn't relate to him specifically. Unless you can actually do that it's not going to be to effective as a self-name flip
(Look below: See that quote)


[^ Terrible setup btw.]

I've coffin contenders! Cool story, so if someone barge in with weapons, what? You'd play a song when he enters?
I think the true facts is his music more hard-core than him, and when it comes to explicit... its CONTENT'S OFFENSIVE! :eek:
Another okay concept, but it could've been utilized a lot better for effect
#YoureWelcomed

I'll pop lead from the pistol! The way it's "shreddin' through tissue" - you'd be thinking it was "interrupted sneezes!"
not bad for until tissue, after that it was all downhill. the eventual punch was just kind of awkward
He'd buck a heater to bruise a brotha? NAH! - Because "Boredom's doing nothing" - WHAT A "DOUBLE MEANING!"
That's not what boredom means. Probably was your best nameflip concept, but wasn't executed very well

V/ Boredom. two quotes to none. Jo had a few concepts that just didn't get off the ground, nothing that matched boredom's dressup line


If that doesn't work for you, by all means discount my vote.