Awake.

Exis · 07-23-2013, 06:48 AM

I never much figured myself for a ghost,
but transparency apparently develops alone.
I'm an open book, hopeless crook enveloped and stoned,
melodramatic and one hell of an addict.
I've leveled with loans,
but I'm better off broke.
My method in madness is wrestling sadness,
desolate moans caressing my throat as I'm stressed and I'm battered.

^^Niceness.

What I quoted was slick...loved the flow and scheme, thought as a whole it was tight man.I haven't read anythin' from you before that I know of so this was an impressive first look at your work...very enjoyable shit.

...Stay upwards.

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07-23-2013, 06:48 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I never much figured myself for a ghost, but transparency apparently develops alone. I'm an open book, hopeless crook enveloped and stoned, melodramatic and one hell of an addict. I've leveled with loans, but I'm better off broke. My method in madness is wrestling sadness, desolate moans caressing my throat as I'm stressed and I'm battered. ^^Niceness. What I quoted was slick...loved the flow and scheme, thought as a whole it was tight man.I haven't read anythin' from you before that I know of so this was an impressive first look at your work...very enjoyable shit. ...Stay upwards.