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Darth Yoda · 07-22-2013, 10:36 AM

Lol. This is good. It wasn't a rap indeed, nor do I come into any writing on here thinking it is................................................ .................................................. ........................................

... that being said, I liked it. Some parts I felt the wording was off a tad. A tad. Of course none of our writing or wording is off indefinitely, but a tad, yes it may be on all instances for everybody. !!!!!

I liked the concept.

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07-22-2013, 10:36 AM	#6
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182439	Lol. This is good. It wasn't a rap indeed, nor do I come into any writing on here thinking it is................................................ .................................................. ........................................ ... that being said, I liked it. Some parts I felt the wording was off a tad. A tad. Of course none of our writing or wording is off indefinitely, but a tad, yes it may be on all instances for everybody. !!!!! I liked the concept.