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Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 865
Battle Record: 10-7
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u MUST've applied this same principle in ur verse battlin Bags<-- pack'd those n kept goin n ur right! those matches were shitty. but this whore shouldn't speak cuz whats THAT say about a guy who participated in battles ALL four of those weeks ur fat, ugly, over weight n out'a shape. while i run laps for fun on tracks i can't picture u makin it a Round 1, much less a Round 2 befor ur gaspin for air n ya lungs collapse ya girls outlook seems larger than life. she'll take half of ya name cuz when i look at the big picture, that BITCH still only fits in half of the frame dawg, ur banana suit was disgustin! too bad ur a breathin disgrace cuz that 'Getup, made me wanna do that n find a toilet to puke in after seein ur face in reality; ur sad, pathetic, live wit ur parents n whack as hell plus ur Saturday Night Fever's r spent watchin that movie wit ur mom nursin u back to health soft fag, don't start whore. what i'm keyin is hardcore last thing u key'd that had an impact, wuz "I MIZZ U BABY" in ya x-bf's car door this dead mans bleedin Redman. ya cant replace ya sobriety s'when M-E-T-H O.D., man.. it'll be the first drug related death embraced by society |
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Tread Lightly.
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,534
Battle Record: 26-9
Champed - Netcees Battle League
- Battle Arena
- Tag Team Tournament III
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"
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Meth:
Unclaimed was OK but could have been better with a stronger flip, here oh untold is OK wording wasn't good for the punch, lesson is played, ammo was OK, Atomic Blast nah, got ur 6 was dope I never saw that before surprisingly and you worded and flipped that one really well, tumor should have been the other way round for technicality, tumor/tomb or wp had potential but it's tricky to execute it and the 'or' bit was awkward how u did it... north west nah... ur verse against bags was waaay better... guessing u rushed or didn't care about this one... Un: 'Bags' lines are all done, you would have to have an amazingly creative flip or a verrrry harsh punch to make it work.... all four of those weeks was a cool personal... round 1/2 is kinda generic but you flipped it with a personal and I liked how u worded it, still hit for me... big picture ehhh too generic/played... getup was a good idea but the flip was just so-so... saturday night fever I felt could have been set up better but the flip was funny and harsh enough that I still liked it... key'd nah, played... closer was eh/OK.... got potential, hope ur participating in UW on my team :) tbh I gotta give it to Untold as well... he just had more stuff I was feeling... think you took him too lightly Meth... v/ Untold
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