Writer's Critique

StarFaggot · 07-17-2013, 10:04 PM

This is for all writers whether it be open mic (which makes no sense cuz wheres the audio?) text battlers, topicals etc...

Give a pro and a con about the writer above you. It can be short and sweet or elaborate. This is for elevation purposes. A con could even be something like you should battle more or I think you should battle so and so..

So everyone put your egos aside and be serious for a second.

I'll go first and critique myself since no one post before me.

My pro is that I got lots of wit.

Con: Wonder what my secrets is, niggaz'll move on you
only if they know, what your weakness is I have none
Too late to grab guns I'm blastin cause I'm a cool nigga
Thought I wouldn't have that ass done? Fooled you niggaz

07-17-2013, 10:04 PM	#1
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Writer's Critique This is for all writers whether it be open mic (which makes no sense cuz wheres the audio?) text battlers, topicals etc... Give a pro and a con about the writer above you. It can be short and sweet or elaborate. This is for elevation purposes. A con could even be something like you should battle more or I think you should battle so and so.. So everyone put your egos aside and be serious for a second. I'll go first and critique myself since no one post before me. My pro is that I got lots of wit. Con: Wonder what my secrets is, niggaz'll move on you only if they know, what your weakness is I have none Too late to grab guns I'm blastin cause I'm a cool nigga Thought I wouldn't have that ass done? Fooled you niggaz __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]