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06-26-2013, 10:31 AM
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loose leaf bruce lee
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,077
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@Flo Real I guess where I felt this identity disolve was in the last few bars where you changed the grammatical perspective from "He" to "they"
it through me off.. but Im kinda nit picking a little.
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