TTT Round 1: Objective vs. Mr. J

symetrik · 07-13-2024, 12:35 PM

Mr. J:

Short and sweet, playing on the topic and night of the living dead which was cool - since it's a bit "ambiguous" of a topic (which to me is a boon for the ai generated stuff) and it wasn't just "oh it's CLEARLY a wolf", this was a great remix of the assumption a viewer would make of the topic.

While it didn't feel like it had a lot of depth to the story (in that it was sorta just a few moments in the walk), the transition was none the less cool, and the suspense (although improvable) was definitely felt.

Objective:
"Ally" immediately threw me the fuck off until I saw "her" and realized it's a valid (albeit disgusting) way to spell the name "Allie".

I love the story - it feels like she wanders down a dark path to determine some of life's questions, encounters a force of nature (death?) that lets her ask questions and responds in some abstract but revealing way.

The start of the piece is clear, the middle requires a few rereads (and is still a little hazier than I would like it to be on clarity), but the ending fucking rocked it (although... is she playing with the goat's ear or its rear? xD).

"to mourn, and then live with" is dope.

mvgt Objective.

07-13-2024, 12:35 PM	#10
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 708 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	Mr. J: Short and sweet, playing on the topic and night of the living dead which was cool - since it's a bit "ambiguous" of a topic (which to me is a boon for the ai generated stuff) and it wasn't just "oh it's CLEARLY a wolf", this was a great remix of the assumption a viewer would make of the topic. While it didn't feel like it had a lot of depth to the story (in that it was sorta just a few moments in the walk), the transition was none the less cool, and the suspense (although improvable) was definitely felt. Objective: "Ally" immediately threw me the fuck off until I saw "her" and realized it's a valid (albeit disgusting) way to spell the name "Allie". I love the story - it feels like she wanders down a dark path to determine some of life's questions, encounters a force of nature (death?) that lets her ask questions and responds in some abstract but revealing way. The start of the piece is clear, the middle requires a few rereads (and is still a little hazier than I would like it to be on clarity), but the ending fucking rocked it (although... is she playing with the goat's ear or its rear? xD). "to mourn, and then live with" is dope. mvgt Objective.