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Lime Life
Join Date: Jan 2013
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On second read it's even less close.
Lars this verse is really really fucking good. I would love you to move away from the tried and tested, maybe not in a league but in OM. I think you can create something more 'abstract' for lack of a better term because your wording is exceptional.
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