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Old 04-11-2022, 02:25 AM   #4
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i absolutely loved this piece dude not too much to the story but the creativity was out the wazoo.. rhyme structure was off the chain as far as being originals with all your multis and just solid vocab.. all in all pretty cool

ado:
i love that line right there wow:
She’s a tall glass of water that never seems empty
another dope line right there - soo pretty
If each photo captures life, then hers is frozen; polished

umm woowzer what a beautiful story from start to finish it unfolded like a prose should it gives you this soft puffy feel on your lips as a pulse it has that much life in it.. but really it was just how pretty it was that stole the show.. dope vocab and all but yeh it was its prettyness - loved it..

vote = adonis

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