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Old 06-22-2013, 11:28 PM   #7
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Force-feeding the reader rhythms. It can come off pretty damn nicely in segments, and the other times when it's less inspired, the flow is still tangible, so it ticks along. I fucked with that nod to Raid: Redemption, that's a film I'm a fan of.

You rhyme a lot, and go where you like with the content. Overall i'd say it was cool, just not a fan of your style.

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