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Old 03-27-2021, 09:40 AM   #20
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S

Frac vs Seth was dope! but Des is, no debating, a turd
These last rnd of checks the only time anyone was excited anticipating a third
dope concept, not in love with execution
Yo Frac congrats on the promotion!! Maybe it'll bring back ur spouse
Manager of the housekeepers but you couldn't manage to keep your house


Almost quoted 'quick low point'

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D
i guess ur legend status comes from being gassed up, since i have seen u write, kid
just cuz a bunch of snakes were whispering in ur ears don’t mean u were clashing with titans

F
Great. Took my dope line and dumbed down the fire
Only snakes are the 1s on this site who like u as a person so arent honest that u suck as a writer
great concept but ironically kinda stretched out.


S
Smith & Wesson for Frac after I empty the AK in Des, that’s ether bros
Speaking of snakes Frac’ll hear the rattle before hes hit with the lethal blow


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F
Cant respect des cause hes wack with no fans
Verse trash. Id have a easier time reading a kidnappers demands



S
My walls the only place ya mind be, uzi boil ya brain
If I walk in there won’t be a stiff arm in sight, the recoils insane


D
voyeur don’t rhyme with foyer, you fucking redneck so keep guessing
i spose the only french ur fatass knows is gonna be toast and fries and dressing
fuck does that work? either way des’ll leave both u and that faggot frac bleedin
tough to read a kidnapper’s demands huh? is that what u call ur wife’s custody agreement?


3

D
flow’s weak. just admit that u didn’t come heavy this round
ur bitch known to kill too...usually small pets when she sits down


F
Not knowing what a garbage bill is as a grown man isnt right
But not surprised.. Ur verses prove u aint ever taken out the trash in ur life
U both on the bench. Talkin happy endings but aint scoring shit
& youll never start. You 2 would be perfect as getaway cars in horror flicks


4

F
This wasnt a fair brawl. Frac v. Hair loss and a faggot built like paul bearer yall
I stay picking on D, but all seth does is get open an airball


S
U don’t know what a waste bill is? Well with verses that suck the hardest
It’s honestly a blessing.. Cus you’d be even more broke if you paid for garbage
God Frac you’ve lost it. Or never had it. Ur bars is fuckin borin bitch
U keep turning keys with no sign of life like a getaway car in horror flicks
I fw the swagger of 'here's the same concept done better' but it being done a few posts ago doesn't help the impact


F
Turnbuckle worked. Deleted it by accident

S
]Must be hammered, 1/3 bars reference ours ur a drunkard & a bitch
You should know to stick with the program, u already lost custody like this
Broke, kids starving on his weekends, I’ve had enough of this guy
U know garbage head to toe, dumpster diving behind the hotels how u survive


D
]look, faggots. trash; garbage bill or waste management all would’ve been acceptable
but saying “garbage disposal bill” implies you’re talking bout the under sink receptacle
agreed
enough about ur trash bars. let’s talk about tendency to ‘borrow’ and i use that term loosely
i haven’t seen a horror movie bite that bad since the shark ate sam jackson mid speech in deep blue sea
good but so stretched
this ain’t the rewording league, seth. every one of ur drops in here lacks art
when we say flip the other guy’s bar, we don’t mean just rearrange the front & the back part
talk to em


Generous with quotes

Seth - 7 quotes, not counting the horror movie bar, just left it in to reference it
Frac - 6 quotes
Des - 5 quotes, not counting the bar he nobly sacrificed to be the voice of the reader. Thanks Des.

Probably preference but I have Seth by a small margin. Thought his use of personal angles wth flipping stuff in the cypher gave him the edge, stick with the program being my favorite line

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