Otherworldly

Universe · 03-02-2021, 10:31 PM

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In the words of Kurt Cobain before he gave his shotgun a taste...
"They laugh at me because I'm different; I laugh at them because they're all the same"
You drop letters, great... just make sure they are a lot better paced
Cuz you can get scarred Overeem-marks like Brock Lesnar's face
I'll stoop to your level like a staircase, you left in a stupor
You droppin' fast, oxygen masks... I increase the cabin pressure like Uber
I guess future me saw a disaster and did some recon after
Don't know if I fly by the seat of my pants or just have my jeans on backwards...
Now we've established some ground rules - Stay the course on the double bitch
Cuz only thing around the necks bend is the rope I hung you with
Insignificant vets, you couldn't make waves with a boat engine that revs
It's so simple and yet... I'll smack ya boy-n'-see a slow ripple effect
Knock ya dentures loose for years, who compares to the most ruthless here?
Won by skin of your teeth, but I'll keep those new veneers as souvenirs
The teacher's now the student, weird; I should speak on how you lose bitch
But when it comes to that shit? Catfish - I can't bring myself to do it
You got a cool sig in store... tragic you can't call it humidor nothing...
Believe me buddy, I don't have to be intuit to see it coming...
Some figures of speech are unheard of; I can't recall my statements off-hand
But compared to you I'm more of a physicist than a shaken pop can
You flake out on me like dandruff, seasoned vets think confetti just fell
Now I bet you'll speak out of turn like a GPS redirecting itself
Hang tight like BTK's victims, the story's told when you're down and out
But you're not privy to that whole phallus, see? Like a glory hole in an outhouse
Loud mouths... Give us a topic and you'll find it awfully quiet
I'll just drop the knife in 'til you pulsate like a zombie's diet
"Nothing shocks me these days" Silence. I'll hit ya with a taser zap
Too bad punchlines are lost on you like generation alpha with paper maps
We sift through everything you're a Borat... Topicals, technique, the battle scene
You're the black face of Halloween - That's an Ali G analogy
Gun bars? Capital idea... At least that's the agreement
I get lowercase smacking the keys quick - You get lower case I actually mean it
You could do an about face like a pic battle and still clone bars instantly
You just another awful mini me with thin range like close proximity
I lockdown hierarchies; You use an El Camino to hunt in the streets
But to me, one elk a mean no hunger for weeks
In the throws of a fit like judo gi's, frail bones will break when the arm sets
And throwing down the gauntlets... me concentrate on the large threats
Used to command respect, but I know you lost all your fight bro
Cuz in retrospect you're all Jaded... just like The Tonight Show
You can put your neck on the line like tracheostomy valves on a phone...
But I just don't think being humble abode well... like a home
This is no game, my art craves attention - I'm making it known
You mad? Gotta be Stark raven though if you see yourself taking the throan
Hate to break it to you like a shiv... Although you might deceive most
We on netcees know you're a downright square upstart like a cheat code
That's how your relationship broke... man you damaged it good
Now you wait on her hand and foot like how half-shipped mannequins stood
At a standstill and shook; I can't compete with what your bipolar mind delivers
I can tell you all the reasons that I'm sicker but melting polar ice is quicker
That split personality shows your lack of talent's in question
Then your duality's mentioned... Either way y'all co-worst like invalid confessions
Dig in ya heels like wrestlers; Showing up every week in a season's rare
You could fix a broken steering wheel and still couldn't say ya be-prepared
I hear you chomping at the bit like Pacman for whatever I may reveal
I take in all your bull, dozing off... but still can't level the playing field
Had it up to here with your daily speils, none of them with a shadow of truth
I'm up on my pedestal with a chateau view... that's how I shat over you
Now you're stuck in a rut, Snyder cut, I won't just clown on you once
Based on where I left your carcass, you SHOULD be down in the dumps
I'll buy a vowel; I have a consonant stutter when my mouth doesn't shut
Don't know if I took my talons down south or an owl just lunged...
I Mother Earth? I'm OTHER earth - All you nerds eat my dust
All that terror-forming mars your work quicker than Elon Musk
Delivery's not up to snuff, like a still born one month shy
Enough's enough; Y'all can't rhyme unless you build toward a punchline
Layouts barely align, bars are paced with no rhythmic signs
Lines aren't clearly defined, like a parking space in the winter time
Your pre-writtens are in high demand? Ehh, maybe on paper
But these victims of mine I hide 'em and... save them for later
That's staying in your favor... What I tap into ain't that simple
Each line has more panes-taking detail than stained glass windows
Been washed since I met you; Droplets are forming, all of it's normal
You got ya head in the clouds, brainstorming... Sorry I have no taller-rinse for you
All the bravado on this forum is not something I have to retort to
Cuz when standing before you all you have to say is, "Small world"...

... of course dude.

03-02-2021, 10:31 PM	#1
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Otherworldly ...... In the words of Kurt Cobain before he gave his shotgun a taste... "They laugh at me because I'm different; I laugh at them because they're all the same" You drop letters, great... just make sure they are a lot better paced Cuz you can get scarred Overeem-marks like Brock Lesnar's face I'll stoop to your level like a staircase, you left in a stupor You droppin' fast, oxygen masks... I increase the cabin pressure like Uber I guess future me saw a disaster and did some recon after Don't know if I fly by the seat of my pants or just have my jeans on backwards... Now we've established some ground rules - Stay the course on the double bitch Cuz only thing around the necks bend is the rope I hung you with Insignificant vets, you couldn't make waves with a boat engine that revs It's so simple and yet... I'll smack ya boy-n'-see a slow ripple effect Knock ya dentures loose for years, who compares to the most ruthless here? Won by skin of your teeth, but I'll keep those new veneers as souvenirs The teacher's now the student, weird; I should speak on how you lose bitch But when it comes to that shit? Catfish - I can't bring myself to do it You got a cool sig in store... tragic you can't call it humidor nothing... Believe me buddy, I don't have to be intuit to see it coming... Some figures of speech are unheard of; I can't recall my statements off-hand But compared to you I'm more of a physicist than a shaken pop can You flake out on me like dandruff, seasoned vets think confetti just fell Now I bet you'll speak out of turn like a GPS redirecting itself Hang tight like BTK's victims, the story's told when you're down and out But you're not privy to that whole phallus, see? Like a glory hole in an outhouse Loud mouths... Give us a topic and you'll find it awfully quiet I'll just drop the knife in 'til you pulsate like a zombie's diet "Nothing shocks me these days" Silence. I'll hit ya with a taser zap Too bad punchlines are lost on you like generation alpha with paper maps We sift through everything you're a Borat... Topicals, technique, the battle scene You're the black face of Halloween - That's an Ali G analogy Gun bars? Capital idea... At least that's the agreement I get lowercase smacking the keys quick - You get lower case I actually mean it You could do an about face like a pic battle and still clone bars instantly You just another awful mini me with thin range like close proximity I lockdown hierarchies; You use an El Camino to hunt in the streets But to me, one elk a mean no hunger for weeks In the throws of a fit like judo gi's, frail bones will break when the arm sets And throwing down the gauntlets... me concentrate on the large threats Used to command respect, but I know you lost all your fight bro Cuz in retrospect you're all Jaded... just like The Tonight Show You can put your neck on the line like tracheostomy valves on a phone... But I just don't think being humble abode well... like a home This is no game, my art craves attention - I'm making it known You mad? Gotta be Stark raven though if you see yourself taking the throan Hate to break it to you like a shiv... Although you might deceive most We on netcees know you're a downright square upstart like a cheat code That's how your relationship broke... man you damaged it good Now you wait on her hand and foot like how half-shipped mannequins stood At a standstill and shook; I can't compete with what your bipolar mind delivers I can tell you all the reasons that I'm sicker but melting polar ice is quicker That split personality shows your lack of talent's in question Then your duality's mentioned... Either way y'all co-worst like invalid confessions Dig in ya heels like wrestlers; Showing up every week in a season's rare You could fix a broken steering wheel and still couldn't say ya be-prepared I hear you chomping at the bit like Pacman for whatever I may reveal I take in all your bull, dozing off... but still can't level the playing field Had it up to here with your daily speils, none of them with a shadow of truth I'm up on my pedestal with a chateau view... that's how I shat over you Now you're stuck in a rut, Snyder cut, I won't just clown on you once Based on where I left your carcass, you SHOULD be down in the dumps I'll buy a vowel; I have a consonant stutter when my mouth doesn't shut Don't know if I took my talons down south or an owl just lunged... I Mother Earth? I'm OTHER earth - All you nerds eat my dust All that terror-forming mars your work quicker than Elon Musk Delivery's not up to snuff, like a still born one month shy Enough's enough; Y'all can't rhyme unless you build toward a punchline Layouts barely align, bars are paced with no rhythmic signs Lines aren't clearly defined, like a parking space in the winter time Your pre-writtens are in high demand? Ehh, maybe on paper But these victims of mine I hide 'em and... save them for later That's staying in your favor... What I tap into ain't that simple Each line has more panes-taking detail than stained glass windows Been washed since I met you; Droplets are forming, all of it's normal You got ya head in the clouds, brainstorming... Sorry I have no taller-rinse for you All the bravado on this forum is not something I have to retort to Cuz when standing before you all you have to say is, "Small world"... ... of course dude. __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future.. Last edited by Universe; 03-02-2021 at 10:47 PM.