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06-18-2020, 05:19 PM
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Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 446
Battle Record: 8-4
Champed - Guerrilla Writing League
Rep Power: 5558447   |
Sweet and sharp man. Lots of strong vocab and interesting imagery used here. You conveyed inner turmoil. The image I got was a guy muttering to himself in a dark room. Rhyme scheme was straightforward but appropriate for the tone of the piece. You should look into joining the GWL man. I see some great potential here.
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