Week 5: Contenders Match: Inno vs Scar SCAR WINS

Adverse · 04-26-2020, 06:29 PM

This battle was honestly everything a contenders match should be. A good contrast of styles and two great verses. You both did justice to your topic.

Scar - Very creative topic choice, i liked the way you brought your verse to life by describing the salmon pies (which I've never had but am now craving one after this piece lol) the imagery was there, and as a writer when you can appeal to other senses through description (smell, taste etc) that's just an excellent quality to have as a writer. I felt like i was there, i also like how well disguised your endgame was it didn't really catch me off guard as much as i was just happy with the outcome of it all. It came all together in the end and wrapped up in a nice bow.

Inno - This felt rushed to a certain degree and started off very slow in my eyes, but you picked up a lot of steam as you got deeper into the verse, but this didn't feel like your typical Inno verse. It was just really inconsistent compared to what we're used to seeing. After what you've went through this week with the whole debacle in the champ match, it's understandable.

Going to vote for Scar here, i loved the overall picture he painted and the story he told it was great. Inno just didn't meet his usual standard here had he done so this battle probably would have been better.

V/Scar

04-26-2020, 06:29 PM	#9
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	This battle was honestly everything a contenders match should be. A good contrast of styles and two great verses. You both did justice to your topic. Scar - Very creative topic choice, i liked the way you brought your verse to life by describing the salmon pies (which I've never had but am now craving one after this piece lol) the imagery was there, and as a writer when you can appeal to other senses through description (smell, taste etc) that's just an excellent quality to have as a writer. I felt like i was there, i also like how well disguised your endgame was it didn't really catch me off guard as much as i was just happy with the outcome of it all. It came all together in the end and wrapped up in a nice bow. Inno - This felt rushed to a certain degree and started off very slow in my eyes, but you picked up a lot of steam as you got deeper into the verse, but this didn't feel like your typical Inno verse. It was just really inconsistent compared to what we're used to seeing. After what you've went through this week with the whole debacle in the champ match, it's understandable. Going to vote for Scar here, i loved the overall picture he painted and the story he told it was great. Inno just didn't meet his usual standard here had he done so this battle probably would have been better. V/Scar