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Adverse · 01-14-2020, 09:09 PM

Hey bud, i don't see why nobody comments on your posts, you got a lot of potential. Ths only thing I'd say is to put a little more passion into your bars, you've got a good flow. Do you memorize your lyrics before spitting them or read them? Because it sounds like you're just reading them off a paper or something and you'd benefit from knowing them from top to bottom before you hop into it. Remember quality over quanity! But i like your sound and think you got a lot of potential.

01-14-2020, 09:09 PM	#2
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Hey bud, i don't see why nobody comments on your posts, you got a lot of potential. Ths only thing I'd say is to put a little more passion into your bars, you've got a good flow. Do you memorize your lyrics before spitting them or read them? Because it sounds like you're just reading them off a paper or something and you'd benefit from knowing them from top to bottom before you hop into it. Remember quality over quanity! But i like your sound and think you got a lot of potential.