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Adonis |
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3 | 27.27% |
Objective |
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5 | 45.45% |
Mr J |
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1 | 9.09% |
NYCSpitz |
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4 | 36.36% |
Candy |
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1 | 9.09% |
Scar |
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2 | 18.18% |
Innovator |
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2 | 18.18% |
Master Rock |
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6 | 54.55% |
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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I agree. It was too cluttered and should have been polished thoroughly, a story driven topical wins over that unless I had executed it better. As it stands now it's a bit all over to place to say the least, haha. I still don't regret my decision for going for it, I'll keep doing similar stuff like this and take feedback to heart until I get it right.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o |
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