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06-12-2013, 12:30 AM
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The COAT...
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: BC, Canada
Posts: 1,723
Battle Record: 28-20
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patrown - very peaceful read, however it was incredibly short, especially considering an ext was given. It's hard to get engaged in piece so short. I really enjoyed the tone in the ending though.
deadman - smooth read, so much substance, wasnt disappointed with this verse. the stalin/lennin line stood out to me. +1 deadman - in fairly one sided victory imo
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