Valedictory Address

NYCSPITZ · 06-09-2013, 09:35 PM

That's some real shit to end with. Nice drop. I liked this part the best:

I am that "could've had it all" guy, the wouldn't pass the ball type
traded basketball hype for excessive alcohol nights
not even mad at y'all, I'm relaying what's real
wish for minutes standing tall for every day that I kneel
can never say what I feel beyond anonymous verses
cuz there's always insecurities, that gossipy person
that pause for concern, moments of cautious discernment
the fear of seeing what's outside these walls of modest internment
plus I'm constantly workin-
another haunted diversion.
too scared to answer if all of this is honestly worth it
karma is purchased - think about that
regardless of service
a wretched tithe to stretch the tide so rampant narcissist worship...
…will only partially surface.
are you nauseous or nervous?

^^^ That's hot fire like Dylan and I vibed by reflecting on my own personal experience here...somewhat similar to what you dropped. The way that portion ended was cool.

06-09-2013, 09:35 PM	#3
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	That's some real shit to end with. Nice drop. I liked this part the best: I am that "could've had it all" guy, the wouldn't pass the ball type traded basketball hype for excessive alcohol nights not even mad at y'all, I'm relaying what's real wish for minutes standing tall for every day that I kneel can never say what I feel beyond anonymous verses cuz there's always insecurities, that gossipy person that pause for concern, moments of cautious discernment the fear of seeing what's outside these walls of modest internment plus I'm constantly workin- another haunted diversion. too scared to answer if all of this is honestly worth it karma is purchased - think about that regardless of service a wretched tithe to stretch the tide so rampant narcissist worship... …will only partially surface. are you nauseous or nervous? ^^^ That's hot fire like Dylan and I vibed by reflecting on my own personal experience here...somewhat similar to what you dropped. The way that portion ended was cool.