LIGHTNING ROUND: Viper (3-1) vs. Chyeahhh!!! (6-5) - VIPER WINS

Jabari Black · 08-21-2018, 08:06 PM

This is a nice battle. Flowed nice. ‘Kool Moe’ didn’t really have a double meaning so that was one of the negatives. But I thought you ended the punch well. It takes a good pen to end punches without using similes so props for that. Also it did feel slightly SnF but overall, I liked the bar.

Viper, idk where tf this came from but that punch was nice. The set up coulda been better but was fine. Work with the tools was a cool little tie in. Let a hammer talk like bob the builder is fire and pretty funny to me too. Only critique is the too/hammer/construction flip has been done before - but this one was different.

Overall, vipers punch had more impact and landed harder imo.

Mvgt Viper

08-21-2018, 08:06 PM	#8
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	This is a nice battle. Flowed nice. ‘Kool Moe’ didn’t really have a double meaning so that was one of the negatives. But I thought you ended the punch well. It takes a good pen to end punches without using similes so props for that. Also it did feel slightly SnF but overall, I liked the bar. Viper, idk where tf this came from but that punch was nice. The set up coulda been better but was fine. Work with the tools was a cool little tie in. Let a hammer talk like bob the builder is fire and pretty funny to me too. Only critique is the too/hammer/construction flip has been done before - but this one was different. Overall, vipers punch had more impact and landed harder imo. Mvgt Viper