Champ Match: bleak (4-0) vs. Chyeahhh!!! (4-1) - BLEAK WINS

Jabari Black · 07-21-2018, 03:54 PM

Bleak had a nice little concept. It was a little hard to grasp imo. It wasn’t that your wording wasn’t bad but the setup could have been better. The concept was good though and had a few decent tie ins. Overall solid.

Chyeahhh your bar was a little harder to grasp. First line was pretty funny. I think the second line was pretty scattered. I get that you were going for a Bags flip. I get the Ghost Recon game part but I’m missing the double meaning f recon.

Overall I got Bleak. I think Chyeahhh’s concept had a lot of potential, but bleak had cleaner wording and better execution

Mvgt Bleak

07-21-2018, 03:54 PM	#14
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Bleak had a nice little concept. It was a little hard to grasp imo. It wasn’t that your wording wasn’t bad but the setup could have been better. The concept was good though and had a few decent tie ins. Overall solid. Chyeahhh your bar was a little harder to grasp. First line was pretty funny. I think the second line was pretty scattered. I get that you were going for a Bags flip. I get the Ghost Recon game part but I’m missing the double meaning f recon. Overall I got Bleak. I think Chyeahhh’s concept had a lot of potential, but bleak had cleaner wording and better execution Mvgt Bleak