WK 9: Exis 1-1 vs. Killing Spree 1-3 - Killing Spree WINS!!

DynamiCz · 07-07-2018, 11:53 AM

I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision
Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted

Nice rhyme scheme, just not a battle verse type opener to go with so this didn't hit

I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct
Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin'

Didn't get this one cause you jumped off flow on the ending bar

Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward
'Til you is missin' your teeth
Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach

Light, but ok

Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree
Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit
Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit

Shorten the bars down bro, cheese lines played, but this was still decent tho

Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate
Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence.

I didn't quite get this one, again shorten the bars up a little bit

Overall, you had a decent verse more on the key style side, have to tune it up where its brings more aggression against your opponent. More direct and shorten the bars up a little bit homie.

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Listen Faggit

Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout
U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out!

Lol nice opener

U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke
U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts

Lol funny

Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death
U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step

Fiya!!!!

& Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay
Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play

Decent

pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look
ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked

Lmao yoooo, good closer!

Nice verse here! Lol I don't think I need to explain much on your verse. I liked it overall. That Fedex line was dope. Props!

V-Spree, Props to both tho!

07-07-2018, 11:53 AM	#7
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	I'm better than pupils educated by masters usin' peripheral vision Fuck the usual system, my only mission's to whip bitches in2 line via who isn't lyrically gifted Nice rhyme scheme, just not a battle verse type opener to go with so this didn't hit I'm the mystical prince, you ain't original nigga like every print be distinct Any foot you have placed upon Earth is considered as weak, & all the feats you is claimin' Didn't get this one cause you jumped off flow on the ending bar Is nothin' compared to both of my feets kickin' out frickin' wayward 'Til you is missin' your teeth Couldn't touch where Midas be with it if you were to increase your reach Light, but ok Shouldn't fuck with a mind supreme like mine if you wanna succeed here Spree Rag away mole...go & bleed a bit Run & get trapped where some rat got killed for cheddah keepin' on some cheesy shit Shorten the bars down bro, cheese lines played, but this was still decent tho Didn't your fucked up mother done teach you right? You needs to keep the whites separate Some colors don't mix in this washed up cycle of rap, the Netcees police will find evidence. I didn't quite get this one, again shorten the bars up a little bit Overall, you had a decent verse more on the key style side, have to tune it up where its brings more aggression against your opponent. More direct and shorten the bars up a little bit homie. -------------- Listen Faggit Wrap ur neck W/Cable till ur face shown in pout U aint wired for PureFlex But U'll Seizure from one as I choke U Out! Lol nice opener U new to this, wen a punch Nox? it drop a joke U aint Sicc but The more I expose ur a Bitch of a dude @Amen Might Block Ur Posts Lol funny Deliver punches to this snitches face, 9'll Force death U prolly aint a Fed Ex! But I'll Drop U off @ur Door step Fiya!!!! & Ur wife? I Fuk'er hard where this lame lay Now ur Ex a Bish An all it took was Simple Game Play Decent pull the burner to ur buiscuit, U got that dead look ironic U rep CHef on ur hat, Cos this is how U get Ur head cooked Lmao yoooo, good closer! Nice verse here! Lol I don't think I need to explain much on your verse. I liked it overall. That Fedex line was dope. Props! V-Spree, Props to both tho! __________________ ...ThA New ErA...