P.S. I hate you.

[IamBenT]

Gonna use quotes to go in, cuz you went in!

"he feel shame when he crave for his lovers clit."

This was a bit jarring for me, seeing as its the first reference of a sexual nature, could have used a few other words to keep the rhyme here and not jar me so much, but maybe that's what you were trying to do??

Wednesday:
Done asking questions for the tears he's shed,
and thinks he's the reason to why his angel fled.
Spends the day watching her empty side of the bed,
If only he could explain his eternal regret,
but it doesn't matter now that she's dead..
He'll just sleep through the sorrows instead...

this day really shined, lyrically flowed great, gave me the heart of who this man is and how he suffers.

"then reality struck and he entered third degree pain"

Didn't like, thought maybe there was a way to word this and the following two lines so it wouldn't come off as awkward

"The phone is ringing but he doesn't answer it,
tired like when the final stage of cancer hits."

Love that line, could have made it even stronger if you turned it into a metaphor instead of a simile.

Wow, this reminded me plotwise of the Clooney film The Descendants in the Husband Wife relationship, but your verse is obviously darker. Some great use of rhyme and simile in several parts of this. I felt it was a solid verse.